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If you can't fly on your dreams anymore,
I'm sorry, but don't worry,
you have simply grown up.

If you can't build a little empire on your dreams,
I'm totally sorry,
you are a dead man walking.
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FridgePoetProject Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
What an intriguing and thought-provoking piece.  The title complements it perfectly.  Well done.  :clap:
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Professional General Artist
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
well i don't like the sound of stanza two much. lol
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Aisuringa Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I still fly on my dreams! c:
I love this. It's beautiful.
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BadandAngry Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
Thanks.
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KristianaGrand Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
So true and powerful!
It may resurrect some corpses...
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Rovelae Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful. Just. . .I have no words. :faint:
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BadandAngry Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Thanks.
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Redsterfish Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Professional General Artist
I am dreamin´of a white x-mas!?
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rafun1312 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ow, this is awesome. So simple, so true, and still so strong!
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BadandAngry Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
Thanks
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rafun1312 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my pleasure
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BigHairMexican Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
This is so profound! So sad, so true, and enough to scare anyone into figuring out how to get to that point.
In the favorites, now.
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BadandAngry Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
Thanks 
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XdiSTRESSionX Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's amazing how small poems can have big impacts. And this poem speaks truth. Nice job :)
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BadandAngry Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
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